Year 11 Language Analysis

The process of writing a language analysis is easy enough to understand and this should help you work your way through it methodically.

We’ll be working through these steps over the next week or so. 🙂 Enjoy!

1.Read the article.

2.Determine the contention and key arguments (WHATs).

3.Consider who the audience might be – how can we tell?

4.Re-read the article, annotating for HOW the arguments are presented (language, style, tone, persuasive techniques, and literary devices).

5.Consider the image (HOW).

6.Discuss and note WHY this language, tone, style…etc was used to present these arguments to this audience.

7.Plan an introduction.

8.Plan the rest of the essay.

9.Write the analysis.

10.Evaluate and improve upon each others’ attempts.

Welcome to Year 7 History

Welcome!

We’ve talked a little bit about the reasons why we study history and some of the definitions that we need to know… I’ll regularly post here if I need you to access any special information or if I’m away.

Can’t wait to get started!

Love Miss C

Year 10 Exam Revision

Hey lovely year 10s!

FIND each of these things in LOTF.

  1. Example of good leadership from Ralph
  2. Example of good leadership from Jack
  3. A reason (w quote) of why Piggy would be a good leader
  4. A reason (w quote) of why Simon would be a good leader
  5. A scene (specific quote) where we see civilisation being maintained
  6. The climax of the book (turning point) why?
  7. Three examples of a motif through the text and how it develops
  8. Quote which depicts the fall of law
  9. Quote which shows the evil in human heart
  10. Quote which supports the good of humanity
  11. Scene (specific quote) where the evil of humanity is foreshadowed
  12. Scene which shows the influence of law and order on the boys
  13. Scenes/quotes which show the different types of law/order in each “tribe”

Use the ebook to help you out! http://gv.pl/pdf/lord_of_the_flies.pdf

Try to find one of each and if you have time, more!

Thanks for being such an incredibly awesome class and feel free to email me with any questions tonight. I will be out most of the night but I’ll try to answer any qs sent before 10pm 🙂

Lots of love,

Miss C

6 Tips for Speaking In Public

Neil Gaiman, author of Coraline and many other fantasy novels put together a great list of public speaking tips for those of us who are a little scared of speaking in front of people… check it out. Miss C 🙂

 

A friend of mine wrote to me recently and wanted to know about public speaking. He was going to have to give his first ever speech, and asked if I had any advice or tips. 

This was my reply to him. And I’m posting it here because it might be of use to some of you.

Tips for speaking. Let’s see…

1) Mean it. Whatever you have to say, mean it.

2) Either write exactly what you want to say, or just make notes, and extemporise around it.

3) If you’ve never given a speech before, give it to your wife, your dog, friends, walls, cows, children, trees first. Get over the weirdness of talking aloud. Make sure it flows. Practice.

4) Have a point. Go somewhere. Start somewhere and go somewhere else.

5) Putting a joke in at the beginning is a good thing. Not something particularly funny, just something comfortable to put people at their ease. But you don’t have to worry about it – and it doesn’t have to be a joke. Just something that says that you know where you are.

6) Relax. When all’s said and done, it’s just a speech

Rebuttal

A rebuttal is a direct argument against a point from the opposing side. It actively addresses the other side of the argument, attempting to prove their point wrong in meaningful ways.

This is often paired with reasonable and logical tone as well as evidence and statistics.

It shows the writer is confident in their argument and is willing to engage with opposing points.

Extra Language Device Revision

Hi guys! Your language device test is tomorrow so check out the PPTs in the post below! You could also look at some of these short pieces and see which language devices are used.

Enough already: Australia was built by refugees

How low our leaders have fallen in pursuing the votes of Australians blinded by prejudice. They should be ashamed of making political capital out of the suffering of people who are in the same kind of ”boat” as most of our forebears. We should treat asylum seekers as we would wish to be treated in similar circumstances. All of us who are non-indigenous are descendants of refugees of some sort or another. Our country is built on, and by, refugees.

Let us demand an end to this scaremongering; let us demand it be put in its correct context: a global problem caused by stupid, cruel men fighting. Let us demand a focus on what matters: how to make our mineral wealth work for all; how to maintain a society where work is respected and rewarded, no matter how lowly the task; how to care for water, soil and air as the highest priority; and how to encourage and reward creativity in every field of endeavour. Lift your game, leaders. Millions of us are waiting for a sign of hope.

RAE BARCLAY, Highton

Read more: http://www.theage.com.au/comment/the-age-letters/enough-already-australia-was-built-by-refugees-20130824-2sioc.html#ixzz2dgNnd09m

 

We’ve become selfish

”Why do Tony Abbott and Kevin Rudd keep referring to them as boat people?” my 10-year-old brother asked me while watching the news. Unknowingly, he had brought up the most important issue. Why don’t our politicians regard ”boat people” as humans? More importantly, why has the public followed in their footsteps? We have become a selfish people. We refuse to help the thousands who are coming here; who need a place where they won’t be shot at. We have convinced ourselves that the little aid we give is enough – we don’t want our social services clogged up by newcomers, who, by the way, do become taxpayers.

OLIVER JOHNSON, 15, Camberwell

Read more: http://www.theage.com.au/comment/the-age-letters/enough-already-australia-was-built-by-refugees-20130824-2sioc.html#ixzz2dgO3EUdL

 

 

We’re a selfish bunch

Charlie Pickering accurately summarises our feelings about the saga of the election campaign (”No disguising this dog of a debate”, 18/8). Sadly, however, he leaves it until the last line to ascribe blame for this woeful situation – a less demanding audience and media, as well as politicians who cannot act.

As Shakespeare said on at least one occasion, the fault is in ourselves. Why do politicians promise handouts at this particular time instead of exposing their deeply felt political philosophies? In essence, because the majority of us don’t give a stuff. If we can see a few dollars in our pocket for maternity leave or keeping the car industry going we will vote accordingly, with little to no reference to the broader needs or future of the nation.

Australians, although clearly capable of great generosity of spirit, have become a very selfish bunch and it takes little encouragement from the media to focus this angst on the political process. Politicians know this very well and respond accordingly.

TONY PRIESTLEY, Fitzroy

Read more: http://www.theage.com.au/comment/the-age-letters/enough-already-australia-was-built-by-refugees-20130824-2sioc.html#ixzz2dgOe3NWU